Tuesday, September 16, 2008

redid the page .. what can I say.. I'm a redoer..


looks better this time out..

6 comments:

Flint Lockjaw said...

Actually, I liked the other one better.

Gary Fitzgerald said...

ah well... I posted it to the inkers list and they mentioned that there wasn't a lot of depth or separation in the first one (I was trying to be a bit more graphic in that one).. they all liked the second one better..
I like aspects of the first one better and other aspects of the second one..

rory said...

I like these pages Gary. I know this might drive you crazy, but I'm thinking somewhere between the two. The second page appears a little too dark overall...either way they look nice , good use of zip tones and gradients!

Gary Fitzgerald said...

Rory, I (and the whole inkers yahoo group) agree... it needs more highlights to pick thinks out of the grey..

flaviano said...

really good and various shots!

Gary Fitzgerald said...

hey flaviano, thx for popping over to my blog.. big fan of your stuff...