I kinda like the guy on the left..

more 'ordinary looking'..

think I like this composition better..

W i p

just trying to get a feel for the guy.. will mucho tidy this one up..

the first Alberts

is this pee?

is this pee?...... it smells like pee.... I think it's pee..... is this pee?

tiny sketch 6

I have a new, new plan..

details to follow...

(again)

tiny sketch #5

final page pasteup rough

this is the final page rough for page one.. now have to go back and tighten it up a bit.. or a lot...